Inside my CIA Career: The Moving Picture Show

Inside my CIA Career: The Moving Picture Show

Thanks to my CIA Career

If you’ve read the last few books in the Detective Emilia Cruz police series set in Acapulco, you may have noticed that video plays an important role in providing clues and solving the mystery.

In 43 MISSING, the footage from police interviews and metadata information embedded in video, as well as speech-to-text video searching, are all vital plot elements. Emilia creates a database, using metadata, in order to do keyword searches against raw video.

43 MIssing

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In RUSSIAN MOJITO, the killer is spotted on surveillance video inside the luxurious hotel where Emilia lives.

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In NARCO NOIR, a hidden camera jumpstarts the action while a bit of movie making leads Emilia to a game-changing decision.

Narco Noir by Carmen Amato

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All of these ideas for how video helps to create or solve a plot element comes from my CIA career and my experience using video as an analyst, collector, or teacher.

Video for Intel Purposes

Video is an unparalleled tool for understanding environment, culture, industrial capability, personalities. The sources of useful video are legion.

Traditionally, news footage was the primary source of video content. From North Korea to Latin America, video has provided key insights. For example, we tracked the failing health of Fidel Castro and Hugo Chavez. We tracked failing economies and crumbling infrastructure.

Related post: Inside my CIA Career: Analysis

Here’s a particularly affecting piece of video from BBC on Venezuela.

 

Recently, The New York Times, PBS, and other media outlets have published powerful video of China imprisoning its Uighur population even as Beijing denies it.

 

Social media has exploded video content. People enthusiastically reveal much about themselves, their environment and their vulnerabilities.

From dashcams to screen captures, there are so many new sources of video that can potentially be exploited for intelligence (and mystery novels!).

Video is also a learning tool. As the head of one of the US intelligence tradecraft schools, I incorporated video in training courses to illustrate intelligence challenges and formulate role-playing exercises.

Technical collection

I really learned the power of video as a technical intelligence collector. I spent hours monitoring surveillance video, tweaking camera angles, and identifying patterns of behavior.

The job was both tedious and exhilarating. Some footage was trash, other minutes were treasure.

But just like in the Detective Emilia Cruz books, grainy surveillance footage yielded actionable intelligence.

You can learn a lot from people when they don’t know they are on camera.

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Book Review: True Fiction by Lee Goldberg

Book Review: True Fiction by Lee Goldberg

TRUE FICTION by Lee Goldberg

This outrageously campy thriller is pure escapism. Prepare to suspend disbelief, enjoy a zany premise, and get carried away.

The premise

Ian Ludlow, author of the he-man soldier of fortune Clint Straker thriller series, is a former TV writer from L.A. who is nothing like his heroic protagonist. But Ian is famous enough to be invited to a CIA-sponsored retreat with other action-adventure writers to dream up villainous scenarios so the Agency can prepare for the world’s emerging threats.

(Note: the CIA has lots of folks imaginative enough to write their own scenarios. See blog series above, thanks 🙂

Two years later, Ian is on a book tour in Seattle when the crazy scenario he developed for the CIA actually happens. Panicked, he reaches out to the other retreat writers, only to find out that they are all dead.

Suddenly, Ian’s recent rash of accidents don’t seem so random. When another attempt is made on his life, he goes on the run, dragging along a dog walker who works part-time for his publisher.

Ian doesn’t know the retreat wasn’t sponsored by the CIA but by a power-hungry corporation determined to use his scenario to take over US national security agencies. Ian is a loose end that needs to get tidied up.

The twist

Knowing that he’s being tracked, Ian needs help. Luckily the TV show he wrote starred the sort of help he needs. As the TV show comes into focus, it’s one of the funniest parts of the book.

Hollywood and the Vine. The tagline of the TV show is hysterical: Half man, half tree. All cop.

Sort of Starsky and Hutch meet The Ents.

Overall, the pace is slick, the writing is punchy, the situations are almost believable, and the campy fun never stops.

Bottom line

Although TRUE FICTION wraps neatly at the end, Ian’s saga continues. I can’t wait to grab the next book in this series.

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Inside my CIA Career: the Coup Kit

Inside my CIA Career: the Coup Kit

Coups

My official resume says this about the 5 years during my CIA career when I was an all-source analyst:

Performed all source analysis of geographic topics of intelligence interest in support of US national security, including National Intelligence Estimates

Action officer during 24/7 analytic coverage of coup d’état events in Africa, the South Pacific, and East Asia.

Let me direct you to the phrase “coup d’état.” When you are an intelligence analyst assigned to cover a country, and that country becomes engulfed in civil unrest, a military takeover, etc., you are the person expected to pull all the information together, provide analysis of fast-breaking events, and brief stakeholders, i.e. key decision makers like the President.

Related post: Inside my CIA Career: Analysis

Carmen Amato in the South Pacific

In the South Pacific, circa 1988

Step 1: Ask

The first question to be answered in a coup event was always “Are any Americans in danger?”

If the country is a major US partner or ally, if the US has a national security or geographical interest there, or if someone in the current administration has ties to that country, then there’s even more pressure to swiftly assess the situation, distill facts, and provide judgments in written reports and verbal briefings.

Step 2: Get a list

When I was an analyst, there were so many coups in Africa, the South Pacific, and East Asia that we developed a checklist of what to do if there was a coup in your country. My boss Jerry, who favored plaid sport coats and ran around in his socks, was an experienced officer who kept a “coup kit” in the office.

It was an actual box with checklists, phone numbers, and exemplar reports from previous coup events so when things fell apart in your country and you were called into the office at 2:00 am, you weren’t starting from scratch as the phone rang off the hook.

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The coup kit also included a blanket and snacks.

Coup d’états aren’t always fast. A prolonged coup event could be a grueling marathon of reporting, briefings, targeting planning, and meetings scheduled to coincide when people across the world are awake.

Few meetings take place at your desk, but could be held at the State Department, the Pentagon, etc. I recall a particular week-long coup attempt in a country that was an important strategic ally for the US. We worked in three shifts to ensure 24/7 coverage, constantly trying to make sense of fragmentary and conflicting information.

Teams had to prep for twice daily video conferences, a stream of ad hoc special reports, and the regular intelligence publications.

Jerry’s coup kit was a great lesson in giving yourself the best possible advantage when you know hard things loom ahead.

Step 3: Apply the lessons

I’ve tried to adapt that lesson to being a mystery author by developing systems to streamline my publishing efforts and create repeatable processes. Every so often, I update my writing coup kit with checklists and resources to help me navigate the publishing world. A system of clipboards keeps everything organized.

Red cabinet in my office

Red cabinet in my office

And snacks.

What’s in your coup kit?

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Inside my CIA Career: The Analytic Puzzle

Inside my CIA Career: The Analytic Puzzle

First Job

My first position with the Central Intelligence Agency was as a political analyst. The official CIA website describes analysis jobs as:

“Collaborative. Problem-solvers. Critical thinkers. These are the qualities needed for CIA analytic positions. The ability to study and evaluate sometimes inconsistent and incomplete information and provide unique insights that help inform decisions.”

The website offers more about being a political analyst at CIA:

“You will support policymakers by producing and delivering written and oral assessments of the domestic politics, foreign policy, stability, and social issues of foreign governments and entities. Your analysis will examine these actors’ goals and motivations, culture, values, history, society, decision making processes, and ideologies in the context of how those elements affect US interests and national security.”

In short, you are solving puzzles. Complex, ill-defined, and hidden puzzles.

For the first five years of my career, I did just that. It was a terrific introduction to not only the US intelligence community and US military but also to the challenges of international diplomacy.

Carmen Amato in Fiji

In the South Pacific, circa 1988

Information from multiple sources crossed my desk. I had to sift through the details to find patterns and  motivations. Sometimes key details were there and clear as a bell. Those times were rare.

Mostly, the puzzle pieces didn’t fit together. The story was murky and incomplete. You always wanted more and better pieces.

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Former CIA Director (and Secretary of Defense) Leon Panetta, writing in WORTHY FIGHTS, put it this way:

“In the real world of intelligence . . . breakthroughs are the result of patient and resolute work, the slow accumulation of facts, each of which may seem ambiguous but that collectively add up to a hypothesis.”

Teamwork

Teamwork was imperative. Not only do teams of CIA analysts work together on a problem or a publication, but analysts work with those in other agencies.

Analysts connect with counterparts in other government agencies and the military, consulting and often collaborating.

I became close friends with a State Department officer who made baby quilts when my children were born. I also had a bit of a crush on a Marine colonel who headed up a community-wide task force (this was before I was married, ahem).

These experiences inspired the task force scenes in 43 MISSING: Detective Emilia Cruz Book 6. Emilia is assigned to a task force to investigate the mass disappearance of college students, a crime that mirrors real events in Mexico.

She teams up with a difficult cop. Meanwhile, she’s been offered a fortune to derail the effrt:

“What’s going on?” Cardenas split a chocolate bar from the stash in his desk drawer and handed her half.

“The Avilas,” Emilia said. She had coffee in one hand and chocolate in the other. As if staying calm wasn’t enough of a challenge. “I think we need to check them out again.”

“But the rally motive doesn’t fly.”

“There has to be something else,” Emilia said. “Too many threads connect to them.”

“We weren’t saying they’re blameless.” Cardenas frowned. “Avila still told the police chief to turn the students over to El Choque. But the more compelling motive lays the blame on Flores.”

“I suggest we go down two tracks on the theory they’ll converge,” Emilia said. “Both Flores and Avila. If we dig deep enough, one of them will give away the motive.”

“Is this women’s intuition?” Cardenas asked.

Emilia jiggled her knee impatiently. “It’s the analysis. There’s no way to arrange all these links that doesn’t put the Avilas in the middle.”

To her relief, Cardenas nodded. “All right,” he said.

“You take Flores,” Emilia said. “I’ll work on the Avilas.”

Lennox was still waiting for her call. Waiting for her to say she could wrap up the task force in return for $50,000.

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Style

Being an analyst meant writing in a disciplined style and specific formats, including for the Presidential Daily Brief, which David Priess wrote all about in THE PRESIDENT’S BOOK OF SECRETS: The Untold Story of Intelligence Briefings to America’s Presidents. A bit of an academic tome, but with great historical vignettes.

I have to credit one of my first bosses with teaching me how to write. As opposed to academic writing, which usually follows a fact-fact-fact-conclusion format, intelligence publications—for readers who are perpetually pressed for time, like the Secretary of State–follow a key-judgments-fact-fact-fact format. I was fresh out of grad school, buoyed by my Master’s thesis and successful defense of it at a major academic conference. Switching my mindset was tough. I will always remember Jerry, who was partial to plaid sport coats and running around the office in his socks, taking the time to coach me.

Now as a mystery and thriller author, I really appreciate how being a CIA analyst forced me to become a disciplined writer. I learned how to construct an argument and create useful outlines. There was no waiting for the “muse” to strike before getting down to work.

Carmen Amato at CIA 2016

At CIA Headquarters, with my Career Intelligence Medal, November 2016

But that fact-fact-fact drumbeat has proven hard to shake. I may be writing fiction now, but often find it a struggle to be humorous, use pop culture references, or drop qualifiers like “almost certainly.”

But I’m almost certainly trying.

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What I did in the CIA: Glutinous but not Unflavorful

What I did in the CIA: Glutinous but not Unflavorful

Blame it on the Swedish meatballs

Early in my CIA career, I was having lunch in the cafeteria of the Original Headquarters Building (back when it was the only Headquarters building.) My friend Willa was apparently feeling daring that day. She ordered the Swedish meatballs.

After a few minutes at the table, I asked Willa how were her Swedish meatballs.

“Glutinous but not unflavorful,” she replied.

FYI, Willa went to Yale.

I did not.

Wordsmiths

“Glutinous but not unflavorful.”

Translation: My lunch looks like crap but tastes okay.

But “crap” and “okay” aren’t as precise as the words Willa used.

At the CIA, we were all wordsmiths in addition to whatever other skills and jobs we had. There is a certain discipline, flow, and format required by intelligence work. Mastering it was not easy, but it helped to be surrounded by people like Willa who were very cogent and precise in their thinking and expression.

When it comes to intelligence writing, descriptive precision is imperative. Conclusions and key judgements always come first, followed by the evidence to back them up. Modifiers are often used (“almost certainly,” “probably,” etc.) so that the prose does not mislead or assume a context not supported by the evidence.

Transferable skills

I spent my first 7 out of 30 years at the CIA as an analyst. Every subsequent position I held, as intelligence collector or other role, required the same understanding of how to use words to present information, clarify complex issues, and support conclusions.  Accuracy and objectivity were paramount.

Now retired, I’m comfortable reading non-fiction that delivers the same pace and detail as intelligence reporting. I love a crisp descriptive detail, a context that allows me to see the issue or event more clearly, and things in chronological order.

This is great for research, especially as I curate background details for the GALLIANO CLUB historical thriller series.

But transferring my CIA writing skills to the world of fiction takes effort.

The prose can’t be glutinous. It has to be flavorful.

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Book Review: SNOW by John Banville

Book Review: SNOW by John Banville

SNOW by John Banville got a hearty endorsement from several hard-core mystery reader friends and it lived up to expectations in every way except one.

It’s a freezing, snowy winter in 1957. Ireland is still a new country. Detective St. John (pronounced Sinjun as he takes pains to note) Strafford is sent to the country home of the Osborne family to investigate the murder of a visiting family friend, a Catholic priest.

It’s quickly apparent that this is a locked room mystery. Someone in this highly dysfunctional family must be the villain.

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Ireland’s troubled religious history and enduring divisions are on full display. The family is Protestant, as is Strafford, but the priest was an avid horseman and hunter who was great pals with the dad, a retired military man. Of course, the all powerful archbishop in Dublin wants everything hushed up. Strafford is caught between the powerful Catholic Church, a long-suffering boss in the police department, and his own notions of justice.

Everyone in the family qualifies as a suspect. The lady of the house is an addict who seduces Strafford, the son and daughter dislike their parents and ancestral home, and the father might have murdered his first wife. No one seems terribly upset about the dead priest in the library.

The author’s sense of time and place is excellent. The writing is superb, with descriptions that lure us into this cold, murky winter investigation.

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Strafford makes keen observations about the family as they drift through the investigation like actors on a stage fulfilling typecast roles. The author cleverly makes Strafford an actor on the stage, too. He’s the second lead who creates ripples that are resolved in Act III but isn’t enough of a presence that we remember the actor’s name after the curtain falls. Strafford is still finding his way, still unsure of what he wants out of life, and that makes him an enigmatic officer of the law.

Endeavor tv series

SNOW has the same vibe as the tv series Endeavour, about the young Inspector Morse. If SNOW is ever made into a movie, actor Shaun Evans would make the perfect St. John Strafford. More about the tv series on imdb:  https://www.imdb.com/title/tt2701582/

Given the quality of writing, my one complaint about SNOW was that the motive was sadly unimaginative. Basically, we’ve seen this before. Or maybe I have just read too many mystery novels.

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The Big Pivot of 2021

The Big Pivot of 2021

The Big Pivot

Do you remember the sofa moving scene in Friends? They guys are doing their best, but it’s too big to get up the stairs. Ross keeps yelling “Pivot, pivot” to no avail.

That’s 2020. In 2021 we’ll turn the corner.

My personal pivot

In 2020 I felt the need to write about something more uplifting than Mexican drug cartels.  (hmmm, wonder why?)  So after releasing NARCO NOIR (Book 8) and the box set of Books 1-6, I put the Detective Emilia Cruz series on pause and pivoted into the past.

(Don’t worry, there is more to come for Emilia.)

The GALLIANO CLUB historical thriller series is a BIG pivot. I’m going from contemporary crime on the mean streets of Acapulco (cell phones, video forensics, drug smuggling plazas) to a Prohibition era thriller trilogy (Tommy guns, Model T Fords, illegal breweries).

Related: The Galliano Series webpage

Playing the pivot

Not only have time and place changed, but style as well. In the Detective Emilia Cruz series, the reader is inside Emilia’s head the entire book. In the Galliano Club historical thriller series, there are multiple points of view, each with their own cadence and style. I’m reveling in the creative challenge.

Related: Mini Masterclass: how to write a mystery series

Galliano Club 3 book series

The 3 books in the Galliano series are meant to be read in order. Each book’s central plot unspools against the backdrop of a series-spanning story arc:

MURDER AT THE GALLIANO CLUB

Luca Lombardo is the jack-of-all-trades at the Galliano Club, a hangout for Italian mill workers. The club is both home and family for Luca and he’ll do whatever it takes to keep it afloat, including staying silent about a murder.

From her apartment over the club, Ruth Cross witnessed the crime, but a scandalous past keeps her quiet.

Could hitman Benny Rotolo be involved? Run out of Chicago by Al Capone, Benny fled to Lido determined to establish his own bootlegging empire. Turning the Galliano Club into a speakeasy is Step 1.

The longer the murder at the Galliano Club goes unsolved, the bigger the trap of lies.

Who will get out alive?​

 

BLACKMAIL AT THE GALLIANO CLUB

The heat is on in Lido, New York, when blackmail letters land on the Galliano Club’s doorstep. The message is simple: Pay or die.

Explosions follow. Will the club burn before Luca Lombardo, the club’s jack-of-all-trades, figures out who is behind the threats?

Warning: Blackmail is contagious. Police officer Sean O’Malley uses Ruth Cross’s past against her to get what he wants. Chicago hitman Benny Rotolo dabbles in the extortion racket, too.

As blackmail terrifies everyone connected to the Galliano Club, murder may be the only way out.

 

REVENGE AT THE GALLIANO CLUB

The body of a strangled woman is fished out of the Mohawk River near Lido, New York. With the help of Galliano Club members, she is identified as a waitress from Chicago.

Hanna Gorski travels to Lido, determined to find her sister’s killer. She’ll bring him to justice any way she can.

Luca Lombardo would help, but he’s in jail facing kidnapping charges. This is good news for Chicago hitman Benny Rotolo, who figures he can finally steal the Galliano Club and expand his bootlegging empire.

But Benny didn’t bargain on Hanna Gorski.

Neither did anybody else.

 

Leap of faith

When I started my writing career, I was worried about being pigeon-holed as a person who only writes books set in Mexico. It would have been easy to hang my hat on that, with a website decorated like a piñata, etc, etc. Instead I kept the focus on being a mystery and thriller author writ large.

But branching out into US historical fiction feels like a huge leap. Will my readers follow?

I hope so. The Galliano Club historical thriller series is packed with great new characters, dramatic events, and atmosphere from my home town.

Related post: From New York to Mexico and back again

This isn’t a Manhattan speakeasy tale with flappers and bathtub gin. This is illegal beer and blue-collar toughs.

Will you meet me at the Galliano Club?

 

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Best of 2020: Top 10 Book Reviews from the Mystery Ahead Newsletter

Best of 2020

Yes, 2020 had a silver lining. We all stayed home and read more.

Every other Sunday, I fed the collective appetite of fellow mystery lovers with the Mystery Ahead newsletter. Readers enjoy sneak peaks of what I’m writing now AND reviews of books I love and think you will, too.

Based on your feedback, here are the Top 10 Best of 2020 mystery recommendations from the Mystery Ahead newsletter. How many have you read?

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Every other Sunday, Mystery Ahead newsletter subscribers enjoy exclusive excerpts of coming books, thought-provoking conversation starters, and recommendations for what to read now.

Assassin's Vow free book

1. ASSASSIN’S VOW by David Bruns and J.T. Olson

Authors Bruns and Olson bill themselves as the Two Navy Guys and are rapidly building a following among fans of military and espionage thrillers.

In addition to their WMD Thrillers series (WEAPONS OF MASS DECEPTION, JIHADI APPRENTICE, RULES OF ENGAGEMENT, THE PANDORA DECEPTION) they have a series of outstanding standalone novellas that function as prequels and “in-between” tales.

Warning: The pace is fast, the action is blazing hot, and the research is meticulous.

The international fight against terrorism is central to the books and novellas. The writing is on par with Tom Clancy and other top-notch writers of the genre.

The reader walks shoulder to shoulder with military and intelligence officers from multiple countries. When it comes to the terrorists, these authors have done their research and give us fully formed characters, not caricatures.

ASSASSIN’S VOW is a free prequel novella in their Standalone Suspenseful Short Reads series. Rachel Jaeger is an Israeli intelligence agent assigned to “wet” work, i.e. assassinations. She’s married to her unit commander, Levi. Other than Levi, she has little to call her own. Few possessions and no family beyond her Mossad colleagues.

When Levi is captured on a mission to kill a notorious international terrorist, Rachael nearly loses her mind. Only the vow to get her husband back or kill his killer will save her.

The gut-wrenching drama of Rachael’s life is brilliantly laid out. I was amazed at how so much action was contained in 117 pages. The end sets us up for THE PANDORA DECEPTION in which Rachael is loaned to the US for a mission with a US Navy officer who appears in earlier books.

If you love national security thrillers, ASSASSIN’S VOW is a great way to meet a new author duo, both of whom are US military veterans, as well as a fascinating set of characters and settings torn from the news.

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The Saint book review

2. THE SAINT series by Leslie Charteris

We have the proverbial 1000 cable channels at home. One of them is the FE TV network, showing mostly black and white television shows from the 1960’s and 70’s. That’s where I discovered the British show The Saint, starring Roger Moore after he was Ivanhoe but before he was 007.

The Saint is a study in mid-century modern style. Think sack suits, bar carts,  languid cigarette smoking, and a Volvo P1800 sports car. At the beginning of each episode, someone says his name, prompting a halo to appear momentarily above Templar’s head. This is a reference to the saint caricature used in credits, book covers, etc.

As Simon Templar, whose initials created his nickname, Moore is a modern day Robin Hood/pirate/soldier of fortune/reformed jewel thief.

It’s a given that he plays both sides of the law, is known (and feared) by police everywhere, and is one of the most famous and instantly recognizable people in the world.

The series is based on an enormous body of SAINT stories by Leslie Charteris, many of which were converted into screenplays for the series. The entire collection, written over the course of 30+ years beginning in the 1930’s, has been re-released for Kindle Unlimited. Each volume contains 3-7 stories. Each story is a standalone.

The tales are the epitome of retro phrasing and international flair. Templar’s dialogue is peppered with flippant lines oozing confidence and movie star glam. The descriptions reflect both the author’s and the character’s globe-trotting lifestyle.

A dashing blue-eyed modern buccaneer who speaks half a dozen languages, Templar is at home anywhere, be it mining for gold in Mexico or playing baccarat in Monaco. His wealth, it is implied, comes from sleight of hand but not outright theft. He outwits everybody. Templar is never left holding the bag, unless it’s full of uncut diamonds no one is looking for.

Charteris was likely influenced by the mischievous gentleman thief of E.W. Hornung’s famous Raffles stories. For a modern comparison, think of Ian Fleming’s more famous James Bond series, which came later. Templar’s villains are generally thieves and cheaters, however, rather than those intent on world domination.

Like Bond, there’s always a pretty girl for Templar to romance. More than most of his contemporaries, however, Charteris was an equal opportunity villain creator. Many of the villains are female, ranging from husband killers to scam artists to an extortionist targeting beggars in Rome.

BTW: my husband has decided he’s the Southern variety of Simon Templar . . . The Ain’t.

LOL

There are 49 SAINT volumes on Kindle Unlimited, with gorgeous retro covers, enough to keep you reading until New Year’s Eve!

Find THE SAINT collection on Amazon >>> https://geni.us/saint

 

Merciful series book review

3. A MERCIFUL DEATH by Kendra Elliott

A MERCIFUL DEATH kicks off the 6-book MERCIFUL series featuring FBI Special Agent Mercy Kilpatrick. Start with the first and read in order as fast as you can. You’ll find yourself in the Oregon woods, looking for trouble before it finds you.

Mercy Kilpatrick grew up in the small town of Eagle’s Nest in central Oregon. Her father led a community of preppers, whose preparations for disaster were a way of life. Stockpiling wood, canning food, and other preparations in anticipation of the  breakdown of civil society, disruptions in electricity, competition for food supplies, etc.

But when she was 18, Mercy was cast out.

Fifteen years later, she is an FBI agent in Portland and returns to Eagle’s Nest to investigate the murders of several preppers. The tautly-spun story mixes the investigation with her encounters with family members, some of whom want nothing to do with her and remain deeply suspicious of the government. To crank up the tension even further, Eagle’s Nest stirs memories of an assault on Mercy and her blind sister Rose, which led to Mercy’s estrangement from her family.

As the current timeline unfolds, Mercy meets the new police chief of Eagle’s Nest, Truman Daly. He’s got his own demons to contend with, notably the murder of his partner when he was a cop in San Diego. But Truman is strong and decent and a match for Mercy, a tough loner who can’t shake her prepper background, as evidenced by the secret cabin she keeps stocked with supplies.

A MERCIFUL DEATH leads right into the next book in a page-turning progression of crimes and relationships. There is significant character development throughout, mostly in terms of the love affair between Mercy and Truman, as well as Mercy’s efforts to reunite with her parents and siblings.

The prepper lifestyle remains a theme throughout the series, along with the phenomenon of rural militias with cult-like rules and “sovereign citizens” who believe that they are not subject to US laws. The vastness of rural Oregon is on display, both in terms of the landscape and the people who live off the grid in its wilderness.

The style is crisp, clean, and fast-moving, with most chapters from Mercy’s or Truman’s point of view. There’s plenty of page-turning action but no FBI legalese or internal politics. Some of the books include forensic details, but for the most part, the mystery in each book is solved by connecting the dots of human relationships and personal motives.

Characters are believable and relatable. Most secondary characters appear in all books. Plots are complex, but not needlessly so, and endings are very satisfying.

In short, I loved this series. Highly recommended.

Find A MERCIFUL DEATH on Amazon >>> https://geni.us/merc1

 

Macbeth series book review

4. DEATH OF A LIAR by M.C. Beaton

I can’t say that DEATH OF A LIAR is the best book in the long running Hamish Macbeth mystery series set in northern Scotland, because they are all equally cleverly written and highly entertaining.

Hamish is a tall red-headed police sergeant. A bachelor, but only because every love affair goes awry for one justifiable reason or another. He’s outfitted the police station in Lochdubh to suit his needs: pets, chickens, and sheep. He barely tolerates the various constables assigned to work for him and doesn’t hide his disdain for power-hungry superiors.

Hamish is imminently likeable.

DEATH OF A LIAR is #30 in the series but it doesn’t matter. Hamish’s world is easy to slip into and you can start the series at any point. The backstory of his failed romances and current constable is always presented swiftly and simply so you never feel you are missing out.

Hamish and constable Dick Fraser–who spends more time in the kitchen than on his job—are called to the home of a woman who says she was attacked by a knife-wielding assailant, but is sketchy on details, timing, and evidence. A medical exam not only refutes her claim but the local doctor reveals she is known for lying about serious issues to get attention.

At the same time, a quarrelsome newcomer to the village turns up dead and buried in her own garden. The liar is killed, too. The entire Scottish police force descends on little Lochdubh, along with Hamish’s ex-girlfriend, a hotshot tv journalist. Clues to lead to Anka, a beautiful Polish baker. Both Hamish and Dick fall under her spell . . . but there’s a murderer to catch first, with the help of a wise seer, yet another old girlfriend, and Hamish’s detective buddy who needs to drink less and think more.

DEATH OF A LIAR a great romp through the misty Highlands with Hamish and the gang. Come for LIAR, and stay for the other 34 novels in the series.

Find it on Amazon >>> https://geni.us/beaton

BONUS: A Hamish Macbeth TV series? Yes, please. Robert Carlyle stars as Hamish with a dog named Wee Jock.

Find it on Amazon Prime here >>> https://www.amazon.com/Hamish-Macbeth/dp/B07VWS3T7M (US link)

 

Thunderstruck book review

5. THUNDERSTRUCK by Erik Larsen

Non-fiction author Erik Larsen (DEAD WAKE, THE DEVIL IN THE WHITE CITY, THE SPLENDID AND THE VILE, etc.) writes true crime with the sweep, suspense, and vocabulary of the best fiction authors. THUNDERSTRUCK may not be his best known book but it is the incredible saga of a true crime that will leave you as breathless as any bestselling thriller.

The book pits two men against each other in a brilliant match-up aboard the SS Montrose as the ship churns across the Atlantic toward Canada. The captain of the ship is the linchpin. This is where THUNDERSTRUCK begins, hooking the reader with a little-known, but absolutely crucial moment in history.

The first man in this unlikely battle is Guglielmo Marconi, a wealthy and eccentric Italian youth who is obsessed with science and turns his family’s attic into a private laboratory. The socially inadept Marconi will be credited with the invention of the wireless telegraph, aka, radio. He’ll monetize his invention and transform global communications via ambitious experiments, risky marketing, British mentors, and his family connections.

The immediate value of Marconi’s wireless is the ability to communicate with ships at sea. Soon every major vessel has a Marconi cabin and telegraph operators sending and receiving Marconigrams.

Next up is Hawley Crippen, a mild-mannered American medical man who moves to London to peddle patent medicines. His wife Cora, with dreams of becoming an opera singer, spends every penny Crippen makes. In due time, she renames herself Belle Elmore, is a minor failure on the British vaudeville circuit known as varieties, and takes a lover who is more dashing than her husband.  Crippen takes solace in a relationship with his very young secretary, Ethel Le Neve.

The lives of Marconi and Crippen move in parallel, each in their own fascinating way. Marconi is willful, selfish, demanding. Crippen is meek, abused, long-suffering.

When Belle’s friends doubt Crippen’s claim that Belle died in California, Scotland Yard investigates. Crippen and Le Neve drop out of sight. A manhunt ensues with Marconigrams flying through the ether.

Meanwhile, a father and teenaged son board the SS Montrose for an 11-day crossing. The captain identifies them as Crippen and Le Neve in disguise. Scotland Yard’s lead investigator boards a faster ship.

What happens next is stranger than fiction. Thanks to Marconi, the entire world except for the passengers aboard the SS Montrose knows about the nail-biting chase through the Atlantic. Will Scotland Yard catch up to Belle’s murdering husband or will the disguised lovers reach Canada first and disappear into the wilds?

The book is absolutely riveting. Larsen spins out the story like a master storyteller, tantalizing and leading us from one key piece of the puzzle to the next. Highly recommended.

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Treasure Hunt book review

6. TREASURE HUNT by Andrea Camilleri

Inspector Salvo Montalbano’s corner of Sicily is a mystery lover’s happy place. TREASURE HUNT takes you there.

As you can tell, I’m having an Italian moment here.

As the book opens, an elderly brother and sister, religious recluses for years, shoot into the street from the balcony of their apartment to punish the city of Vigàta for their sins. It’s up to the man in charge, Montalbano, to climb a ladder in full view of news cameras, and subdue the addled snipers.

Their apartment is an unwashed Italian hoarder’s paradise, full of filthy but costly religious antiques, and one ancient and well-loved inflatable sex doll.

Shortly thereafter, the police get a call that a woman’s body is in dumpster. But Montalbano and his team instead discover a second inflatable sex doll, cunningly disfigured to look exactly like the one found the day before.

Montalbano now begins to get cryptic messages, challenging him to a strange scavenger hunt. Helped by a Swedish friend, a local university student, and the cops Montalbano supervises, the hunt ends in a seriously shocking climax that hinges on clues I never suspected.

Strong plot aside, I love the Montalbano series for his wry inner voice. It’s got the cadence and dry humor I associate with my other favorite Italian author, Giovanni Guareschi, author of the fabulous Don Camillo series. (A small village in Italy after WWII: Don Camillo is the parish priest, locked in eternal combat with Peppone, the Communist mayor. Brilliant.)

For example, Montalbano lets us know his opinion of the idiot coroner in a few light words, but they characterize him perfectly. In another bit of ribaldry, his desk sergeant is the king of mispronunciation and malaprops. Montalbano has also perfected bureaucratese as a way of confusing his superiors into leaving him alone.

Then there’s the food . . . and his domineering housekeeper and her criminal relatives.

In short, TREASURE HUNT (number 16 in the long-running series) is a trip to Sicily with an old friend. He knows what he’s doing, most of the time, and makes us laugh the rest of the time. Highly recommended.

Find it on Amazon here.

 

Harriet Steele mystery series review

7. TROUBLE IN NUALA by Harriet Steel

Harriet Steel’s Inspector Shanti de Silva series set in 1930’s Ceylon is an absolute gem. De Silva is the head of a 3-person police force in the smallish city of Nuala. The British are still the colonial power (today Ceylon is the independent nation of Sri Lanka) and he straddles the divide between the local population and his British bosses.

He has flouted both cultures by marrying a British woman, Jane, who came to Ceylon as a governess to a British family. They live in a bungalow called Sunnybank where De Silvio has an extensive garden and Jane devours Agatha Christie novels.

TROUBLE IN NUALA starts with reports that a tea plantation owner has flogged a worker. A lawyer from the capital of Colombo makes a complaint on the worker’s behalf.

But when De Silva investigates, he finds that the worker has disappeared and the plantation owner is an unpleasant man who is up to his ears in debt. Add a dubious business associate, a frazzled wife, and a chatty mynah bird, and the situation is much more complicated than at first glance.

The heat and scents of Ceylon are captured so well, it’s easy to form a mental picture. The pacing is similar to The No. 1 Ladies Detective Agency or the Commisario Brunetti series, with introspective moments and dialogue-driven action. De Silva’s social standing with the British adds a subtle layer of tension, even as he mentors younger police officers.

There are 8 books in the series so far, all with “Nuala” in the titles: DARK CLOUDS OVER NUALA, ROUGH TIME IN NUALA, PASSAGE FROM NUALA, OFFSTAGE IN NUALA, etc. Plots are true to time and place. As the series progresses, Hitler’s rise to power and the possible implications for the British Empire create additional questions but each book stands alone.

Highly recommended.

Click here to get TROUBLE IN NUALA on Amazon

 

Dublin Trilogy book review

8. THE MAN WITH ONE OF THOSE FACES by Caimh McDonnell

Author Vee James gifted me this book and a tip of the hat to him. THE MAN WITH ONE OF THOSE FACES launches McDonnell’s Dublin Trilogy about the very funny, yet seriously intriguing misadventures of Paul Mulchrone, Brigit Conroy, and Garda detective Bernard “Bunny” McGarry.

Don’t worry if you have never been to Dublin, because by the end of all of the books, you will be intimate with the city and its people, plus the law enforcement powers and politics of the Garda, the national police agency.

The unique sport of hurling. Shopping on Grafton and Carroll. The restorative powers of Irish whiskey and Guinness beer.

Step up to the bar and drink deeply.

Paul had a rough start in life. He was orphaned at a young age, and his only stability was the hurling club presided over by Bunny McGarry, the larger-than-life cop with his own definition of justice. Now an adult, Paul is trapped by a will awarding him a subsistence stipend as long as he does charity work.

He regularly visits a nursing home to fulfill the requirements but one day a resident mistakes Paul for someone else and tries to kill him before dying of shock. When the dead man is found to be a gangster thought to be long dead, Paul and Brigit, a nurse, are targeted by the gangster’s old enemies. Bunny McGarry, who has a soft spot for Paul from hurling club days, makes things worse.

The mix of white knights and black sheep throws gray shadows on many of the characters in the Dublin Trilogy while relationships develop in smart and clever ways. But the real charm of this series lies with dialogue and descriptions, both of which evoke some real laugh-out-loud moments. There’s a line about anybody who could “cut two holes in a tea cozy thought he was John Dillinger” that still makes me laugh at odd moments.

THE DAY THAT NEVER COMES and LAST ORDERS are the next two books in the trilogy, and should be read in order. ANGELS IN THE MOONLIGHT is a prequel that is nonetheless listed on Amazon as #3 in the 4-volume set. The numbering is just one of the quirks of this well-written, funny, and breathlessly paced series.

Highly recommended.

Get THE MAN WITH ONE OF THOSE FACES on Amazon: http://mybook.to/faces

 

Gorky Park book review

9. GORKY PARK by Martin Cruz Smith

Gorky Park is the first Arkady Reno thriller set in Russia. Published in 1981, years before the first breach in the Berlin Wall, the novel was the first popular fiction set in Communist Moscow. Its portrayal of life in Moscow is authentic and unflinching.

I regard author Martin Cruz Smith as a role model. With the Detective Emilia Cruz series, I aim to take my readers inside Mexico the same way he does with Russia. We both use setting, food, politics, and uniquely cultural plot devices.

In GORKY PARK, three murder victims are found buried in snow near the ice rink in Moscow’s Gorky Park. Their faces and fingertips have been skillfully removed. Renko, the Moscow city police inspector for homicides, is called in. Despite KGB interference, Renko finds clues leading to a wealthy American fur dealer and dissidents from Siberia. A visiting New York cop is part friend, part foe.

The Russian locations, from fight scene on a frozen river to feeding ducks by a country dacha, are masterfully done. Life under Soviet rule is fully exposed: dogma no one believes in, vodka to shut out everyday miseries, informers, indoctrination meetings, permits to live in Moscow. It makes for a hefty book, not for the faint of heart, but an immersive one.

GORKY PARK was followed by RED SQUARE, POLAR STAR, HAVANA BAY, WOLVES EAT DOGS, etc. All are vibrant journeys into Soviet Russia with brilliant characters, descriptions that lure you into a shockingly unfamiliar world, and vignettes of the illogical logic of the Communist system.

Now 39 years later, the latest Renko book, THE SIBERIAN DILEMMA just hit bookstores. Ageless Arkady still holds the rank of inspector and still has trouble with the woman in his life as he navigates post-Soviet Russia under Putin. To be honest, this novel, does not even approach the high bar of the early Renko books listed above. It’s a lite beer when you expected a Guinness.

Read GORKY PARK on Amazon. Drink deeply.

 

Rebecca book and movie review

10. REBECCA x 3

These three thrillers all started at Manderley . . .

1. REBECCA by Daphne Du Maurier

Du Maurier published her tour de force novel REBECCA in 1938. The book was one of the first to give us the unreliable narrator and has been the basis for a host of radio, television, and movie adaptations.

The narrator, an orphaned young woman working as a lady’s companion, meets a handsome and wealthy widower in Monaco. Despite their disparity in social class, he sweeps her off her feet and they marry.

He brings her home to Manderley, his baronial family estate. There she pales in comparison with his seemingly perfect late wife Rebecca, a point the sinister housekeeper Mrs. Danvers is at pains to make. When Rebecca’s body is found on her shipwrecked boat, now months after her death, dark deeds could destroy them all.

REBECCA has serious staying power. It’s edgy, gripping, visual, and a Gothic thriller classic. The setting is England in the 1930’s, but the creepy relationships and murderous secrets are timeless.

Get it on Amazon >>> https://geni.us/Rebecca

 

2. THE KEY TO REBECCA by Ken Follett

When I first read this World War II classic, I believed it was the best thriller ever written. The page-turning format inspired the pace of THE HIDDEN LIGHT OF MEXICO CITY.

The novel REBECCA is used as a code book by a German spy who infiltrates British-held Cairo during the war, in an effort to aid General Rommel’s army in north Africa. When the spy kills a soldier, the murder comes to the attention of a British intelligence officer.

A cat and mouse game ensues between spy and intel officer through the streets and souks of the war-weary city. Women, thieves, and the Egyptian independence movement complicate the hunt. The characters are riveting, complete, and their vulnerabilities are twisted by the enemy. The way Follett builds to a climax is a masterclass in thriller writing.

No spoilers, but REBECCA gets the last word . . .

Get it on Amazon >>> https://geni.us/FolRe

 

3. Rebecca, the new Netflix movie

Lily James stars as the unnamed narrator who falls in love with the wealthy and handsome owner of Manderley, played by Armie Hammer. She does a remarkable job of being the waif working as a lady’s companion to a cranky, demanding woman, but an even better job of being the new wife completely out of her depth trying to run a huge Downton Abbey-esque country house already ruled with an iron fist by Mrs. Danvers (Kristin Scott-Thomas).

It’s a loooong movie, but a faithful adaptation, although the ending is less edgy than in the book. Manderley and the surrounding coastline are gorgeous, with many a panoramic sea shot to underscore the isolation the new wife feels.

Lily James is superb, as is the conniving Scott-Thomas. Armie Hammer is a hunky lunk but cuts a dashing figure in a mustard colored linen suit in his first scene.

Highly recommended for a cold, rainy evening.

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The Face that Launched 1000 Words

The Face that Launched 1000 Words

Some authors look for visual cues to help create setting and characters. Most call it research.

I call it antiques hunting.

THE FACE OF THE GALLIANO CLUB

To build the Galliano Club series, I have my grandfather’s account books from when he was City Marshall, as well as a wealth of family stories.

But when I saw this photo hanging on a pegboard in an antiques mall, I knew it was the face of my protagonist. Gianluca “Luca” Lombardo is bartender and jack-of-all-trades at the fictional Galliano Club in fictional Lido, NY.

Vintage portrait

The man in the sepia photograph is 19 or 20 years old, younger than Luca, who is 27 at the start of the first Galliano Club thriller, MURDER AT THE GALLIANO CLUB. He is wearing a suit that is far too big. The jacket is puddled around his waist and the trouser legs spread like a tablecloth.

He’s posed on a leather chair that fairly gleams. His gaze is direct and clear, which is what caught my eye.

The oval frame is beautiful burled wood and in near pristine condition. The glass over the photograph is domed, an expensive feature rarely seen any more. (which accounts for the glare in the photo here.)

Someone in the 1920’s invested heavily in this portrait of a handsome man.

FROM PHOTO TO BACKSTORY

It seemed crazy to buy a photograph of someone I didn’t know. But to make a long story short, I lugged Luca home and hung him on my office wall. To further immerse myself in 1926, I also brought home a giant red cigar box, which at least is a useful organizing item.

The youthfulness of the man in the photograph led to a great backstory element that has already made its way into the first book in the series:

Luca came to the United States as a 19-year-old immigrant from Italy in 1919. Like many others who came from Italy at the time, he lived in a New York City tenement on Elizabeth Street. With little English and no professional skills, he took any job he could find, including bare knuckled prizefighting.

In between bouts, a photographer offered Luca $20 to have his picture taken to display in the studio window. The photographer was hoping a handsome face would entice female customers. Luca agreed and wore clothes provided by the photographer for the picture-taking event.

With the money in his pocket, Luca never gave the portrait another thought.

See more about the forthcoming GALLIANO CLUB series here.

WRITING BACKWARDS

This is a different process than I followed with the Detective Emilia Cruz series. My mind’s eye saw Emilia very clearly but there was no actual face to go with that image until around Book 5, PACIFIC REAPER, when I stumbled upon this image of a Latina boxer.

the face

She’s the spitting image of Emilia. Don’t you agree?

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Longlisted for the 2020 Millennium Book Award

Longlisted for the 2020 Millennium Book Award

10 November 2020

Political thriller THE HIDDEN LIGHT OF MEXICO CITY has been longlisted for the 2020 Millennium Book Award. The novel features a Mexican attorney who fights an insidious plot to use drug cartel money to buy the Mexican presidency, even as his lover fights Mexico’s restrictive social ladder.

Millennium Book Award

Forty books are currently longlisted for the prize, which is sponsored by BookViral Reviews. The shortlist will be announced 21 November, with the grand prize winner announced on 1 December.

The longlisted titles may be seen here: https://bookviralreviews.com/millennium-book-award-2020-2/

The first 2 chapters of THE HIDDEN LIGHT OF MEXICO CITY may be read here: Chapters 1-2

Paranormal Romance Tops BookLife’s October Indie Spotlight

Paranormal Romance Tops BookLife’s October Indie Spotlight

15 October 2020

AWAKENING MACBETH, a romantic thriller with a paranormal twist by Carmen Amato, tops BookLife’s Indie Spotlight of paranormal and supernatural offerings for October 2020:  https://booklife.com/news/authors/10/15/2020/indie-spotlight-part-1-october-2020.html

The tale, inspired by Amato’s grandmother’s advice, is available from Amazon in ebook and paperback editions here: https://geni.us/awakening-macbeth

Awakening Macbeth

From BookLife:

About the book: Professor Brodie Macbeth is tormented by nightmarish scenes pulled from the pages of her deceased father’s British history books.

Author statement: “My grandmother gave me the idea for this book. When we granddaughters had children of our own, she cautioned us to always wake a child gently, never abruptly.‘The soul wanders while we sleep,’ she said. ‘It needs time to come back to us before we’re fully awake.’ But if evil steals a soul, what happens next? My grandmother never told me that part.”

See more about Amato’s family and the genesis of AWAKENING MACBETH, as well as the first chapter, on the author’s website: http://carmenamato.net/awakening-macbeth/

For more information, please contact Carmen Amato at carmen @ carmenamato.net.

Fiction author asks: Why do we fall in love?

Fiction author asks: Why do we fall in love?

True Story

I met my husband at a Memorial Day picnic. After burgers and hot dogs, our host hauled out Trivial Pursuit. Teams were assembled and a fierce no-holds-barred game ensued.

To my chagrin, his team won.

Nonetheless, when he called a few weeks later, we made a date for the 4th of July. He was well-traveled, well read, and had interesting things to say. We thought the same way about things that mattered.

Also, he had extremely attractive blue eyes.

We got married 10 months later.

Wedding

Science of love

My own experience helps, but I’ve been researching love for the key relationship in my forthcoming GALLIANO CLUB series.

What makes people fall in love? Is it purely involuntary? Is there a chemical reaction in the brain?

Was I just a sucker for blue eyes and trivia?

Harvard researchers have done an unexpectedly large amount of thinking about the science behind love, which a 2014 article summed up as: “The sensation of being in an altered mental state, intrusive thoughts and images of the beloved, and changes in behavior aimed at getting a reciprocal response.” https://www.health.harvard.edu/newsletter_article/In_brief_Is_it_love_-_or_just_stress_hormones

Those Harvard types even broke down the chemistry behind the phases of love: “Love can be distilled into three categories: lust, attraction, and attachment. Though there are overlaps and subtleties to each, each type is characterized by its own set of hormones. Testosterone and estrogen drive lust; dopamine, norepinephrine, and serotonin create attraction; and oxytocin and vasopressin mediate attachment.” http://sitn.hms.harvard.edu/flash/2017/love-actually-science-behind-lust-attraction-companionship/

A Yale researcher suggests physical warmth helps the cause of falling in love. Other behaviors that lead to love include positivity, making eye contact, and being a good listener. https://www.businessinsider.com/how-to-fall-in-love-using-science-2017-2#on-a-first-date-get-coffee-not-ice-cream-1

Love, literally

Beyond the science, any good fictional romance has to show how an initial spark of attraction turns into something life-changing. I hate books with insta-romances that have no discernible basis. grrrrr

The reader needs to see WHY two people fall in love. The readers has to believe in their love story.

In THE HIDDEN LIGHT OF MEXICO CITY, Eduardo Cortez Castillo and Luz de Maria Alba Mora find a strength in each other that enables each to accomplish a nearly impossible goal. Neither could do it alone.

In AWAKENING MACBETH, Brodie Macbeth and Joe Birnam bond over mutual loss but recognize each other’s emotional vulnerabilities and help heal them. Yet, those vulnerabilities save their lives.

In the DETECTIVE EMILIA CRUZ series, Emilia Cruz sees Kurt Rucker as someone who can help her manage her situation as the only female police detective in Acapulco. She loves his strength and the fact that it comes without the machismo mindset of a Mexican man. Former military, he’s attracted to her independence and the danger that comes with her job.

Each of these relationships are powered by dialogue. A critical initial conversation between the two characters sets the tone.

Love at the Galliano Club

In MURDER AT THE GALLIANO CLUB, the first book in the series set in 1926 in the fictional city of Lido, NY, our lovers have vastly different backgrounds, yet each is hungry for a sense of belonging.

Rudolph Valentino

Silent screen star Rudolph Valentino is the inspiration for Luca Lombardo. Ironically, Valentino died in 1926, the year in which the Galliano Club series is set.

Luca Lombardo is a relatively recent immigrant to the US from Italy. Still a young man, he’s a widower who feels he must atone for the death of his wife and child.

Dorothy Gulliver

Silent film starlet Dorothy Gulliver is my inspiration for Tess Kennedy. She was one of the few silent film actresses to make the transition to talkies.

Tess Kennedy is a modern woman with a college education (Vassar, Class of 1924) and a job in a bank, but coping with a disintegrating family situation.

How will their mutual attraction play out? Will murder, blackmail, and crooked cops get in the way?

Will anyone have extremely attractive blue eyes?

Read more about the GALLIANO CLUB series here.

>>> If you really want to know more about falling in love, the folks at Romantific have all the answers! Check out this post on how long it takes to fall in love!

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